Persuasue Writting

I think that All Parents and children, should have 1 television free day to have a break watching TV. There are many reasons for this. This will rest your eyes for a day, and it’ll get your homework done as well.

Firstly, there is one day that all children should not watch TV for one day so you could rest your eyes. It will not make your eyes hurt and won’t make you tired.

Secondly, you save time to do your homework and it’ll make your family and teacher happy. It makes you learn better and you will be brainy in the future .

I think that it is a great idea to have a break from watching TV, don,t you?

Partly Cloudy

Partly Cloudy
This morning Miss Oauno showed us a movie. It was set in the sky full of clouds. The title is Partly Cloudy. There was a character called cloudy and a bird named stork. This movie starts with storks and they had to give things to there new parents. But there was one cloud that a stork does not want to work because the boss made him bad things. It was so sad that the stork wanted to be with another cloud. When it nearly comes into a end the stork came back to open the bag and it was armor for protection so he doesn't get hurt.

Extreme Make Over Edition

Marvin and I worked how to redesign Room 17's courtyard. Today we chosen to do a extreme make over in Room 17's courtyard. our plans we had added a higher drinking fountain because we do not like to bend our backs. But so far Room 17's courtyard is a bit boring and people don't even play there anymore.

Marvin always has idea's he showed me a bench seat it look great for people to sit on so we don't have to sit on the ground. Marvin found it on Mitre 10 mega.

But finally I have the best idea is to take the rails and put stairs only it'll be awesome because it is a faster way to go home and back to school and you won't have to get squashed by other people.

Redesinging room 17's courtyard

This is going to be room 17's new courtyard. I added some new water fountains and a picnic table. I replaced grass with smooth concrete. I wonder where we are going to get some builders?