There was a movie that Miss Oauno showed us. The movie starts when the two octopuses were together and the female one was taken out. The male had to save her because she would be eaten in a restaurant. They try to get the male to get off the truck. Then they jump in different pools and it, and then the female had to save the male that was caught by a bird then it finished it made me laugh.
The koreko of this movie is If you want a friend you have to treat them as you want to be treated.
I would tell my family to the movie because it’ll make them laugh.
Hi tau it me lorenzo from next door you know right I like your story I think the movie was cool and I wish I was there.
ReplyDeleteHi Tau it is me here I wont to say that you have very good story that you have written you have done a good job keep up the great work
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Wow what a great picture, that sounds like a very cool movie. When you write the story you should try to change the the beginnings of your sentences so the
ReplyDeletestory doesn't get boring. Its just like saying I had. I was. I want, do you think thats kind of boring.
From Andrea
Hey Tau I like your story because it sound's funny. I like your sentences because they are very clear. Your Writing is a little bit confusing for me but its all right try again later. I wish I was there.KEEP IT UP.
ReplyDeleteHay Tau I like your story but I think you got to put more information in it so we under stand you.
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Hi Tau its me Kane I really like your movie and your piece of writing too. I wish that I was with you writing the story and keep up the great work bye Tau.
ReplyDeleteHi Tau that was an awesome post about Okatapodi that Miss Oauno let you watched. I really like your introductions, because I really to know more about what you are doing. But I think you have lot of same beginnings that start with the th words. But well done and keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteWOW.That is a awesome story about Oktapodi. I think you are a really good story teller. This story right here makes me wide awake. You have fantastic writing. You really hook me up with this writing about oktapodi. "Did you know that this good and fantastic writing is really good". I like how you have simple and complex sentences. I like how you put comers in long sentences.Well Done. Well keep up your FANTASTIC WORK.From Tauwhare. KEEP UP THE WORK.
ReplyDeleteKIA Ora Tau that was a amazing story you wrote and it was really great you made me laugh that movie was so funny. But that koreko you said on your blog that was Incredible Know on I am going treat my friends like that but great story keep it up. see you later!!!!!
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ReplyDeleteThat was a great story that you wrote I really liked it, but I hoped the male didn't eat the female, any way that was a exciting story it blew me away and some of it was kind of funny I really enjoyed it.
Hello Tau
ReplyDeleteI would like to say I really loved reading your story,and how you used your commas.In my opinion I thought your story was really interesting,I just want to say when you write a story again you just need to add different beginnings.
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Hi Tau My name is Heremaia your movie was a little bit confusing but it was alright you had improved a lot that was the best blog ever your one was better than everybody.you rock tau.
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Hi Tau its me billy I really like your movie and your piece of are oktapodi like that I am watching it now
ReplyDeletekeep it up.